The premise of this book seemed pretty interesting to me as I’m a huge fan of LGBT fiction, but about a chapter in I was really bored of Marion’s writing which seemed pretty passive aggressive and condescending towards Patrick.
I had to skip a few chapters because Marion was getting very annoying! But even once I got to chapter 5 she didn’t stay on-topic enough for my liking so I skipped a few more chapters to get to the part where Patrick narrates.
The writing style really wasn’t to my liking. The boring descriptions of the ocean or the way the cold water rolled down her back were really annoying and none of these tedious descriptions were crucial to moving the storyline forward.Show moreShow less
I had to skip a few chapters because Marion was getting very annoying! But even once I got to chapter 5 she didn’t stay on-topic enough for my liking so I skipped a few more chapters to get to the part where Patrick narrates.
The writing style really wasn’t to my liking. The boring descriptions of the ocean or the way the cold water rolled down her back were really annoying and none of these tedious descriptions were crucial to moving the storyline forward. Show more Show less